On Horeb

by Hannah Herrera

ON HOREB

A poetic reimagining of Elijah’s experience on the mount of God

I find myself here 

on the mountaintop, 

my bones valley weary.

I asked to die;

you said it wasn’t time.

You led me

into the

wasteland,

a chaste 

man,

the only one 

in the whole

Negev.

At your command,

I dried up the skies,

cried,

Leave behind your Asherah and your Baal!

I begged your breath into a dying child;

I piled twelve stones,

summoned fire 

from your throne.

At your demand,

I pleaded relief for the land.

Look!

A little cloud 

like a man’s hand

rising from the sea.

They answered me:

O troubler of Israel, why have you come?

They tried to seize me,

to slay me,

to lay me among their dead.

I fled.

I know I must recall

how you fed me 

with your black-winged hand,

how the widow’s flour 

gave food to us all.

But still I wonder,

Oh Adonai,

will you provide?

I teeter on the peak,

the mount of my God.

Will you meet me here

on this hallowed ground?

Will you pass by,

throw commandments down from on high?

Make my face shine?

From the sky streams

a rushing like the flight of a thousand birds.

All around,

blowing, breaking, cracking.

The rocks are tearing,

the stones are smashing.

Your breath is breathing

this mountain

into the ground.

The earth gives way, 

quivering, shaking;

the ground heaving;

the crags crashing;

the surface splitting.

Heat.

Blinding, bathing heat

pouring from the heavens,

roaring,

scorching, surging, swirling.

A sacred fury;

a sacred, silent fury.

Sudden stillness,

a hush.

Air as quiet as death.

Then a faint trill of the wind,

a soft sigh of the air,

a gentle murmur of the breeze.

I cover my face.

My God is here.

His whisper is enough.



HANNAH HERRERA

Hannah Herrera is a freelance journalist and editor with a passion for creative nonfiction. She has dabbled in poetry for years and enjoys trying to form a written dance of meaning and sounds. She currently lives in Colombia, South America, with her husband, David. For more of her writing, follow her at @ourwovenworlds on Instagram and Facebook.


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