Just a Few More Steps and Other Poems

by Deborah Rutherford

JUST A FEW MORE STEPS

I lift up my eyes to the mountains

where does my help come from?

My help comes from the Lord,

the Maker of heaven and earth.

–Psalm 121:1

The woods slope,

underfoot, covering crunches;

rays slice the emptying limbs,

amber and sepia swirl;

a rustle of leaves,

a chatter of birds.

Lost in solitude,

my ears eavesdrop

on the wild woodland,

quivering in the wake.

Sapphire butterflies’ flit

in the morning dew-scented

freshness of pines.

I grasp my hiking staff

and my Lord.

Behind me now,

the shrouded valley looms

with low, rolling clouds;

my vision obscured for days.

There, deep, murky pools

frothed wretched steam.

Howls caterwauled and

death feasted

with ebony crows

on carcass,

as I reached the foot

of the thick tree-clad ascent.

Beyond that dreadful shadow,

there was another vale

where I dipped into placid pools 

and rested beside ripe meadowlands,

shimmering with wildflowers, 

alive with bleats, buzzing, and song,

before traversing that horrid

dark soul of the night. 

It was there

that I found my hiking staff, 

and my Lord. 

Now, above heavy clouds,

the tops turn fluffy and white;

a cool waft fans my face;

the sun's delight brushes.

My path dumps at a gorge, 

one that plunges

as if the moist earth wept 

when she split open, 

and here were tears:

streaming waterfalls,

coursing rivulets,

birthing seeds for generations

of hemlocks and maples 

laced with laurel and witch-hazel.

My own belly gushes,

my gulf of loss

and forbidden grief,

as I stagger in a wave of anguish,

peering into the soulless abyss 

that seeks to sweep me under.

But a shadow of wings 

lifts my eyes high and higher,

to a majestic tower

beyond the wooded canopy.

An ancient holy mountain, 

moved by the mountain mover Himself,

swathed in golden florets

and lavender hues—

its shiny white peaks plume.

A stream rambles and gurgles,

a chorus of frogs.

My legs and lungs ache;

trails sharp and slippery,

I ascend thin air—

"Just a few more steps," 

the Spirit's winsome melody descants,

as if I would get lost 

in the vista's trance.

I wonder,

"Can I go higher, my Lord?"

"Just a few more steps, my child,"

hums through my being.

Holding onto boulders, 

polished by the wind,

I mount stone steps,

and set foot on the summit.

An ambrosial aroma

unfurls in my chest.

In the distance,

majestic ridges rise;

above, the blue and a pearl in the sky.

The mountain's symphony echoes

softly with the voice of God:

"Welcome, my child."

A veil slips open,

and I step through,

meeting other travelers as well.

Ahead, a table is set,

as long as my eyes can see.

I take my seat—

and there, I encounter my Lord

on this mountaintop.

SMOKEY MOUNTAINS ASCENT

Many people shall come and say,

“Come, and let us go up to the mountain of the Lord,

To the house of the God of Jacob;

He will teach us His ways,

And we shall walk in His paths.”

For out of Zion shall go forth the law,

And the word of the Lord from Jerusalem.

–Isaiah 2:3

We drove up curvy roads

under the forest's canopy,

a kaleidoscopic after the deluge.

Swallowtails fluttered,

and a black bear crossed quickly.

 

Entering the trail,

a bouquet ran wild 'neath

the misty mountains.

My hiking boots held steady

over slick rocks,

and I breathed air so fantastic

I couldn't get enough.

 

A majestic buck preened

at the creek's edge,

while a snake curled

on the side.

 

We climbed with careful steps, 

way above the vale

of vibrant foliage 

and breathtaking vistas. 

Seeing old growth

with new growth 

in the grace of life. 

Here lives a world of bears,

bunnies, birds, 

wild turkeys, and more. 

Then we headed

into the mountain, descending

to a primordial forest floor 

that led to the Baskins Creek Falls. 

Ample yellowish leaves 

and white flowers

mesmerized through fissures, 

where the stream flowed 

amongst smoothed mossy slabs. 

We crunched through thick detritus;

rays streamed, water rushed, 

and something rustled in the bushes.

We had read that this

was an easy hike. 

After the return steep ascent, 

we learned there are no easy hikes! 

But the 40-foot fall was stunning,

and we ate apples under her spray.

A hike is like marriage;

each step is a careful one

so as not to slip.

There are moments 

when you need to slide down

vertical trails to reach,

 ravishing destinations, 

which are challenging,

but with care, attainable. 

My husband guided me up,

glass-like stones shone over the ages.

He held me close 

near the narrow edges

and kept an eye out for a bear

when we saw droppings on the path.

I knew I was the only one 

who was going to get me 

up and down that mountain, 

but my husband and a lot of prayer 

would help.

We ascended higher and higher,

and stepped out of the dark ravine

onto the blessed mountaintop 

where heaven and earth converged.

A paradisiacal cathedral 

under heaven's dome;

scented wildflowers 

swung in the fresh air.

We loved the majestic mountains

and towering Tennessee trees. 

The boundless gloaming,

endless stars, and the moon

have never been closer than they were

on those peaceful and dazzling evenings. 

Over the years, 

these mountains beckoned us home 

just as God did: 

a hesed covenant—

and our ascent, a revelation 

over holy peaks, 

as we become one with God 

and each other.


DEBORAH RUTHERFORD

Deborah loves Jesus, being Don's wife, singing old hymns, and nature walks under the Georgia pines. She is a poet, author, podcaster, and award-winning makeup artist with an Emmy, as well as the founder of the Behold-Her Beauty Podcast and Blog. She is the author of Unexpected Blessings: 40 Days of Discovering God's Best and the forthcoming Prodigal Daughter: Poems of Light for the Lost Ones. She has been published in The Way Back to Ourselves Literary Journal, Vessels of Light Literary Journal, Calla Press Literary Journal, The Truly Co. Magazine, and Prosetrics Literary Magazine.

You can follow her on Substack and Instagram.


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