View From the Bottom

by Nikki Walser

VIEW FROM THE BOTTOM

Sometimes

the hardest journey isn’t the climb,

but the inevitable trek back down.

One misstep resulting

in a decline so rapid, so intense

that I find myself plunging toward the bottom—

tumbling headlong past obstacles, 

which I painstakingly overcame 

during my ascent.

Flying past in a blur,

not even the old devices are left to feign control

over my now inescapable defeat.

Shellshocked, I look up.

From the flat of my back ,

at the base of this great giant,

deflated.

Every second drags on,

as I will my racing pulse to slow.

Here at the foot of all my strife,

I feel the full weight 

of failure.

Muscles used to attain that sweet victory are

now bruised and aching.

If I linger too long, they will surely atrophy.

The unceremonious speed of my plummet,

contrasts so glaringly in light of the healing

I have worked toward all these months—

no, years—decades, even.

Time and energy expelled,

propelling me to the summit,

now converged into a total loss.

Loss of breath,

loss of purpose,

loss of hope.

But this journey isn’t over.

Here at the bottom, 

in the shadow of the mountain,

hands lovingly reach and pull me to my feet.

“Let’s start again,” He beckons me.

This time, I venture not alone.

Should my steps begin to stray

He will break my fall.

Holding steady to my hand,

He deftly guides, 

forging a new way.

As a shepherd cradles a lost lamb,

He carries me—

not through the worn, familiar trails of my past

but onto a new path.

Refashioning serpentine into straight,

He trades my shame for triumph.

Here at the bottom

is where I learn

what true surrender feels like.

NIKKI WALSER

Nikki, AKA "Mama Walser," loves Jesus, her family, and Disneyland (in that order). She has been blessed with the opportunity to teach creative writing and drama classes to the coolest students around. When she is not at school or spending time with her family, she volunteers with the middle schoolers at her church on the weekends. You can find her on Substack: @MamaWalser


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